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Parking garage crime spree ends in arrest

39 year old Edmonton man faces multiple charges

Edmonton, Alberta | October 7, 2015

Rest a bit easier the next time you park -- Edmonton Police Service has made an arrest in a string of apartment parking garage crimes between June and October 2015.

Bryan Keown, 39, is charged with 26 counts of the following:

• theft and possession of stolen property
• break and enter offences
• mischief
• breach of recognizance
• disguise with intent

The arrest followed a collaborative effort between EPS investigative divisions across Edmonton.

For more information, contact Scott Pattison at 780-421-3553/scottpattison@eps.ca

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The Edmonton Police Service's mission is to increase public safety through prevention, intervention and suppression of crime and disorder.

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